Leisure time has always been regarded as the most precious time of our life, since it allows to focus on ourselves, on our goals, to cultivate our hobbies and to forget about work for a while. Many claim that spending such a treasur doing nothing or hanging around is a sheer waste of time. To large extent, I agree with this position, if it comes to speaking about adults. I do not like to spend hours on the coach or watching recomended videos on Youtube, I prefer to use this narrow window of freedom to learn something new, do physical activity or for reading. A different approach should be employed with children. Some sustain that children should not waste their time by playing but they should occupy their leisure time with educational activities. I do not think that this would be the right route to follow, since that children need to develop several skills and abilities which are not written in books and cannot be learned by teachers.
First of allo, playing is not a waste of time, especially when it comes to team sports. Playing team sports, like basketball or football, expose children to a large number of positive attitudes that they will need in their future life, like working together to reach a goal, cooperation, solidarity and trust. Furthermore by playing with other kids, children develop further positive tracts, like the ability of gain friendships and to increase their socialization level. Less tangibly, but not less importantly, spending time away from the school duties permits children to manage better their time, since they have to organize proficiently the day in order to find enough time for doing homework and follow their passions.
In conclusion, children should be encouraged to spend their free time by reserving it for their hobbies and furthermore they should spend enough time at the open air playing with other children, which has a beneficial impact both on physical and mental health.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focusing', 'focussing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: focusing; focussing
...cious time of our life, since it allows to focus on ourselves, on our goals, to cultivat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many claims'.
Suggestion: Many claims
...s and to forget about work for a while. Many claim that spending such a treasur doing noth...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ketball or football, expose children to a large number of positive attitudes that they will need ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...oal, cooperation, solidarity and trust. Furthermore by playing with other kids, children de...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, speaking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93577981651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53101292544 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9951071419 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199296367743 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785768086171 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419771966359 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140298952508 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442807426192 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focusing', 'focussing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: focusing; focussing
...cious time of our life, since it allows to focus on ourselves, on our goals, to cultivat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many claims'.
Suggestion: Many claims
...s and to forget about work for a while. Many claim that spending such a treasur doing noth...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ketball or football, expose children to a large number of positive attitudes that they will need ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...oal, cooperation, solidarity and trust. Furthermore by playing with other kids, children de...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, speaking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93577981651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53101292544 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9951071419 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199296367743 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785768086171 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419771966359 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140298952508 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442807426192 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.