Education is the passport to the future,tomorrow belongs to those who prepare it for today.Presently, a massive number of activities must be instructional so that juveniles can acquire vast veteran and wider range of knowledge otherwise it is invaluable of time.Here,I would like to account for pros of this trend than cons in the impending paragraphs.
There are multifarious points to shore the positive side.First and foremost ,education activities enable children to incline brain acuity. To demonstrate, in sweden,regimes have passed a law that makes it mandatory for toy makers to incorporate some learning skills in every toy they sell and thus it will accelerate the sharpness of mind of teenagers. As a consequence, offspring will utilise their free time in productive way.Apart from it, lavish task require active participation of parents and teaching methods to accomplish them.To elaborate, puzzle games need endorse of birth givers to solve them in a effective way.Hence, didactic task assists students to build harmonious bonding with family members.
Further emphasising on my point of view, spare time activities which are part of teaching make the worthwhile use of adolescent time.To cite an example, pokcards provide great deal of amusement and therefore off springs easily get alluded towards hilarious activities and spend exorbitant time to accumulate information related to fabricated characteristics. Moreover,companies should replace these cards with informative cards and thus youngsters can knowledge from these activities. Consequently, tuition task not only confer fun but also achieve mental creativity of children.
To recapitulates, educational activities uplift the standard of health, wealth and relationship and thus juveniles should consume free time in fruitful activities. As a consequence, learning activities are terrific for holistic development of pupils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78928571429 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33269020156 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689285714286 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.347304513 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.111111111 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 56.0 5.01903807615 1116% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16355338713 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613291159859 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291012668811 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962351213451 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174796616075 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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