Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time
The infants are the future generation of a country and more investment on educational infrastructure for those will pave way for the development of a country. However, the conservative parents force their small ones t study, even during their play time. As a result, I do not agree that, the free hours of a child should be educational, hence it will have an negative impact on creativity and socialization during early ages.
Firstly, the experimentation skills developed during early part of life will be a cue for the creativity skills at later stages. Younger generation should not be always cornered with text books and school curriculum. At least after school time, they should be allowed to experiment the nature and surroundings. Therefore, those hours should be productively spent nurturing the nature.
Secondly, socialization in early part of life will help to be a good citizens. In addition, during early teenage period, they should be free to play and be social with the peer group regardless of any discrimination. Further, after study time, they should be allowed to move around with relatives and family members. More importantly, this will facilitate in develop love and caring among others.
However, these leisure activities should be closely monitored and controlled by the parent. Moreover, the technology has influenced more the young people that the adults. They should not be addicted to computer games and mobile phones. Finally, these activities will kill the productive leisure hours.
When all the above are taken into consideration, in my perspective, I do not agree the younger generation spending their leisure time in educational activities. This will not only affect their creative skills, but also their sociliazation with community. THis will craft them to be a perfect adulthood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ould be educational, hence it will have an negative impact on creativity and socia...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...rly part of life will help to be a good citizens. In addition, during early teenage peri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32871972318 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98404340319 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9679306342 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17333268358 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618082421936 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425207736552 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105751668568 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488240804258 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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