Some people believe that the good leaders are born whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life Who represents the good leader qualities indeed

There are always disputes about nurturing skills or innate talents. One of these disputes is ‎about ‎leadership. Therefore, the question is whether leadership is an inborn talent or it can be ‎learned? ‎

In my opinion, leadership is an innate talent for a compelling reason. leadership is more an ‎abstract subject than theoretical one. Therefore, it is likely impossible to learn how to be an ‎excel leader. For example, every year, many people graduated from management major; if ‎leadership can be learnt, many of them would have been a good leader, while it is apparently ‎far from reality. How many people have we great political leaders that have saved our world? ‎They are a few. What differentiates them form other is their natural talent. ‎

However, having said that, being a talented person in leaderships is not the all things. That is ‎to say, today leadership is more complex and demand solid grasp of economy, phycology and ‎policy. it is true that leadership talent is necessary for a good leader, but without learning ‎these knowledges, success in leading other people does not happen. In fact, ‎learning ‎leadership knowledge and having innate talent in it complete each other. That is why today ‎great political leadership mostly graduated from well-known universities.‎

To conclude, although good leader are persons who are naturally talented in leadership, also ‎learning specific topics are necessary for excelling in leadership. ‎

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Average: 7.8 (8 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leadership
... innate talent for a compelling reason. leadership is more an ‎abstract subject than theor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rasp of economy, phycology and ‎policy. it is true that leadership talent is neces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4678111588 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02484691084 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618025751073 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1529901353 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213749270298 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716139098628 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534779110553 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143579524029 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511018348393 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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