Some people believe that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via internet Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people believe that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since ancient times, libraries have been in tradition and intrinsic part of education institutes and societies. With the advent of modern technology such as internet, computer etc. people believe that libraries are losing its importance and any expenditure on library is of no use. I shall explain both viewpoints in this essay.
Despite the advancements in accessing information using internet from anywhere, some people prefer to go to library and support that government should provide aids for building libraries in every town. First of all, not every citizen is well versed with the use of computer and internet. Particularly, old people still don’t know how to access the information through internet and visit library daily for reading newspaper, journals, books etc. Secondly, lots of the places in the world lack the required infrastructure to use internet and computer. Especially, under developed and developed countries are struggling with basic infrastructure such as power, clean water, road & transport etc. and people assert that accessing internet for information is not viable option. Finally, accessing information in library is cost effective in contrast to getting information from websites. Even today, people borrow the books from library at nominal cost or read at the library at free of cost.

However, people argue that everything is accessible using technology and hold views that setting up library is wastage. Libraries occupy the space which could be used for other purpose such as gym, theater etc. Furthermore, maintenance of library needs recurring cost which is huge sum amount and instead, should be spent on health or improving the infrastructure. Also, finding information in library is more difficult than internet. Moreover, even libraries are using the internet and computer to arrange their set-up.
To sum up, libraries are still popular and used by many people. But, it is also true that access information over internet is very handy and open infinite sources to search the information. Therefore, government provide limited funds to library as more and more people have started to use the internet.

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Average: 8.9 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in contrast, such as, first of all, in contrast to, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4328358209 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83562707275 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2809867562 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263030153509 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857877048291 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617313211974 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162227432976 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393557930817 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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