Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it.To what extent does price influence potential buyers?What other factors influence people to buy a product?

Essay topics:

Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it.

To what extent does price influence potential buyers?

What other factors influence people to buy a product?

Today we have countless manufacturers and numerous products to choose from. Which creates hard competition between the producers. As a customer, there are several features we focus upon before choosing a product. Price is one of the main factors.
In Ancient times, we had very limited selections to choose from becuase of globalization, we have all famous brnads available everywhere. An overhelming majority of people have some miscondenption about brand names. Because of
advertisements, brandings have an important role in the society. Secondaly, price comes in to the picture. It is true that if there is some product priced high, the standard and the qality of raw materials used will be higher. These
facts uphold the grade of the product and chances of durability extend. Every customer seeks profit for the amount they spend. In addition, now brands and price tags are one fo the exhibit elements of social status.
Some of the traditional brands spend huge amounts for adevertisements and in the modern world people are easily notified about advertisements in manifold ways. Such as Newspapers, internet, Telemarketing and via Television
commercial. AS a result, communities easily get attracted to the products and brands are inviting them to spend money on their goods. Last but not the least, there are many celebrities who act as brand ambassidors for products
and convince their fans to use them.
In Brief, we live in a world where advertisements have impacts on the consumers. however, there facts are limited to some extends. In my opinion users will analyse thier needs before choosing a product.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ternet, Telemarketing and via Television commercial. AS a result, communities eas...
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...ho act as brand ambassidors for products and convince their fans to use them. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, in addition, in brief, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24137931034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9481706767 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4381638749 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148672226436 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435126891775 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406772202122 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062547075751 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307765444596 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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