Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Many people feel that life in megapolises has become harder recently but other people are more optimistic and say that it is getting easier instead. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument, and then I will present my own point of view.

On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the advantages of living in a big city outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for claiming this is that the megapolises present significantly more opportunities for work and study. It is also possible to say that in big cities social life is more diverse and interesting. One good illustration of this is the numbers of companies, universities and entertainment parks located in the city, as well as the many events such as festivals and sport competitions held there.

On the other hand, it is also possible to claim that the drawbacks of city life outnumber the benefits. It is often argued that in fact the big cities suffer from ageing infrastructure which cannot meet contemporary demands, and also air pollution. This must be the opinion of people who have to spend too much time in traffic jams trying reach their work. Moreover, the contaminated environment and noise causes worse health among city-dwellers compared to villagers. A second point is that the crime rate outside megapolises is significantly lower. A particularly good example here is the murder statistics.

In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that life is becoming more convenient in big cities. That is because life in the big cities offers more opportunities for career and leisure.

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Average: 8.7 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02573529412 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92229000462 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6172725031 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282147133641 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814215899498 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624991817256 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170661133066 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665199838118 0.056905535591 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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