Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only betterfor their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion
Although there are some people who believe eating no meat or fish helps them with their health and the environment, I do think there is no need to forbid ourselves to eat these food products because there are many benefits on them that exceed the environmental impacts.
It can be argue that the consumption of meat or fish affect people’s health, as some doctors have said and it has been shown on different media, meat and fish, both can bring health problems to the consumer. Red meat, for example, can be the cause of many heart conditions on the people who eat it and big and frequent portions of fish, could actually intoxicate people with heavy metals like mercury.
Furthermore, a high demand of meat can bring negative impacts to the environment, such contribution to the climate change. In order to accomplish the tons of meat people eat daily, there is going to be the need to do more livestock activities, which is outlined as one of the most polluting economic facts in a country, because the amount of greenhouse gases relating to it.
However, in my opinion I do believe it is important to eat regular portions of meat or fish to supply the body requirements and not have health problems later on life. There is not necessary to become a vegetarian to have good health and care for the environment.
In conclusion, it is people’s decision to make about what they want to eat or how they want their eating style to be like, but I do not think vegetarianism is the absolute manner to care about the health and the environment. Benefits by eating meat or fish are more important than the environmental impacts produced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76377547227 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506944444444 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5619692785 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246460311963 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108625471402 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058393421989 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146326096874 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510114592488 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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