Some people encourage Development of factory farming and the scientific creation of fruits and vegetables in agriculture, but others oppose these developments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the help of advance scientific development in the sphere of agriculture, it is possible to farm in factories rather than organically. Some support this view, whilst others have the opposite opinion on this notion. This essay agrees that growing sustenance in-house is beneficial to the people and this is a positive trend that looks set to continue. Nevertheless, this essay will discuss both sides of views.
On the one hand, factions of people cite that the farming artificially will have an adverse effect on humans. As the food grown in factories will never see sunlight which is the main source, it will be grown under helium-- a light which is a substitute. And hence, the natural substance of vitamins and minerals that are in organic will not be available in this artificial food. However, with the growth of technology, this issue can be diminished and can improve the nutrition in food.
On the other hand, the perception of a group is that artificial farming is the best solution for plaguing evil: Hunger deaths. Almost 33% of the world is facing this devastating issue. With the increasing scientific discoveries in farming, we can grow food irrespective of season and location. It has been exemplified in times that the experts who are living in Antarctica have an in-house farm of paddy. I believe that this phenomenon will be the sole solution for the people who are suffering from poverty and hence it will have a positive impact on humans
In conclusion, the science provides us the opportunity to use the environment to our benefit; while some believe that organic farming is not healthy, it will be completely foolish not to recognize the benefit of factory farming.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97543859649 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76027752964 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540350877193 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5903166416 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142406137683 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539216959622 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513564969762 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090760643745 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060071634726 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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