Some people feel that entertainer (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid to much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?
It is believed that entertainers usually earn more money in contrast to the individuals. However, some others jobs should be more paid because of its contribution to human society. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
In this contemporary era, everybody wants money to fulfill their dreams and basic needs. It is certainly true that the majority of stars cannot hold their top position for a long time. For instance, In India, Mr. Rahul Dravid, who is the former player of the Indian cricket team, just after his retirement, he lost some advertisements contract with international companies. That is why he has faced some financial problem during his life. Thus, if they earn a massive amount while on the peak position then it really helpful in a foreseeable future.
However, some people argue that there are numerous other jobs are paid less according to their contribution to society. For instance, Doctors, tutors, soldiers, researchers and so on. Most of the times, they have been working up to late night in case of an emergency. Sometimes, they have no fair enough time even to attend family functions.Therefore, it is clear why some people gravitate towards this thought.
After analyzing the aforesaid points, it has been proven that entertainer stars earn a high salary for some reasons. Nevertheless, such other professionals should be much better appreciated and better paid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20779220779 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9637022528 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658008658009 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4449297948 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230517440996 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722757377904 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775815032396 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149583838953 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747929750555 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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