some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Dicuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Physical exercise are indispensable for enduring good health. To enhance public health many argue that sports facilities should be increased. Others, however disagree with this statement. They argue that increasing number of sports facilities slightly affects the public health, other measures should be taken to improve the public health. This essay will discuss both the point before conclusion is reached.
It is undeniable that lack of physical exercises are causing many illnesses in young people. It has been medically proven that exercise reduce the risk of heart attack and stroke by 50%. Easy access to sports centre could definitely encourage the people to take up the workout regularly. For example, Many counties in England have constructed leisure centres in villages to promote sports and encourage people to take up gyming. This centres have been giving discount for under privilege and student's to take up gym membership. Result of this sports developed of England had announced gym membership has been proliferated to 500% in last decade and reduced heart diseases by half in last 10 years. From this it is cogent that increase in sports centre have positive affect on public health.
On the other hand, People are consuming lot of junk food nowadays. It is directly impacting peoples health, therefore many argue that measure should be taken to grab this menace. For example, In take of ready to eat food causing obesity which is a major threat to current generation. As per world health organisation obese has doubled in last 10 years. This is serious warning therefore it important to create the awareness in people and encouraging them to follow good diet is essential. This prove why some argue that some other measure should be taken to strength public health.
In conclusion,although accessibility to sports centres and equipment's are necessary to encourage the public to take up physical activities. It is paramount that people are advised to avoid unhealthy food habit Therefore, I recommend that food conscious is very important to lead a healthy life. Physical exercise are indispensable for enduring good health. To enhance public health many argue that sports facilities should be increased. Others, however disagree with this statement. They argue that increasing number of sports facilities slightly affects the public health, other measures should be taken to improve the public health. This essay will discuss both the point before conclusion is reached.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34508816121 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68126525335 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445843828715 0.561755894193 79% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9420867508 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.88 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.88 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => More facts,knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31408050096 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991079058744 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931381027959 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228261909241 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678244862701 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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