Declining of the level of public health has became a concerning issue in the modern society and their solutions are widely discussed. Some suggest the best way to tackle this problem is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others and I believe various other measures are required. Discussion will be presented in the succeeding paragraphs.
There is no doubt that the increase in the number and varieties of sports facilities will provide an easier access for people with different interests and skill levels. As the number one health problem in modern society, shown by numerous medical researches, obesity is caused by sedentary lifestyle. With this, an easier access of sports facilities may relief this issue to some extent.
However, to effectively solve the issue in public health, more measures are required to encourage people to live a healthier life and to motivate people to exercise more frequently. Besides lack of exercise, unhealthy diet can jeopardize public health as well. Large consumption of liquor, cigarettes and a high-carbohydrate diet can all lead to serious health problems for the mass. Therefore, relevant measures can be implemented. Some of the measures are organizing more local sports games and events to interest public and imposing heavy tax on alcohol, cigarette and junk food.
In conclusion, public health in the modern society is becoming a serious concern, which is caused by different reasons, and cannot be completely controlled by just increasing the sports facilities. A combination of measures from different aspects that encourage people to choose a healthy lifestyle can solve the issue more effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ining of the level of public health has became a concerning issue in the modern societ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
..., relevant measures can be implemented. Some of the measures are organizing more local spor...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4061302682 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88845693286 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0755812082 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331367005885 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10897380272 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640987267864 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200709949996 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695067477153 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.