Education institutes play a significant role in the development of the child. Today, some people believe this role has been deterred due to privatization in the sector of education. I agree with this statement and feel that private schools give inappropriate gains to pupils for their own financial gains. However banning private schooling cannot be a solution to tackle the problem.
Private schools impose a negative image of the world on students by indirectly teaching crime. In these institutes, control is in the hands of businessman and not on the teachers. For example, when any student misbehaves, a teacher does not have control to punish them. Also in some institutes, punishments are defined as a fine, from which students can learn the concept of bribe and they may get a wrong impression that money can give them freedom to crime. Further, when children learn that some bucks can get their work done without any efforts, they would not study, as a result, they would lack aptitude. This deformation in the education system can generate doctors or engineers with a degree but not skills.
Not only students but also lecturers may also get affected and lose their place in society due to private schooling. When teachers in private academy themselves present an example of the offender, how can they make honest citizens? For instance, they may go to any extent for their own financial gain due to which their respect may be in danger. Even if any tutor likes to rebel this system, he or she might have to face the consequences and would leave the profession.
In conclusion, I agree that private institutes, nowadays, are considered as a profit making business and give the wrong benefits to a learner. However, prohibiting schools might not be the effective solution and government should introduce the policies to govern the education system in the private sector.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268011527378 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.138328530259 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0605187319885 0.0946595960268 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0403458213256 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0489913544669 0.0437548338989 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100864553314 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0230547550432 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71723690063 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0345821325648 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118155619597 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0461095100865 0.021408717616 215% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0172910662824 0.011925033212 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1889.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03514376997 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367412140575 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297124600639 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194888178914 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127795527157 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71723690063 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.5154187994 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5625 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9838667697 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0625 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.2749600639 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.72151898734 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177221254995 0.332605444948 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0972798516321 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0623401446043 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492942958976 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124809912471 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722432996102 0.134430193775 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412251633106 0.0742795772207 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.319483636254 0.324371583561 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482474421354 0.0638462369009 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129472454631 0.228012699653 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00688457717033 0.058150111329 12% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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