Some people like to shop in traditional shops. Others prefer to do their shopping online.

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Some people like to shop in traditional shops. Others prefer to do their shopping online.

With the triumph of computer technologies development in the XX and XXI centuries, many people who had never been given such an opportunity, now are able to shop without leaving their homes. This begs the question: is online shopping preferable in today's world? While buying in ordinary shops reveals several advantages, I still firmly believe that the Internet is a more beneficial approach in this case.

There are a number of reasons why online shopping is more preferable. The main one is that this activity is especially comfortable. This is because nowadays almost every Internet shop provide its customers with a quick delivery means ranging from a low-cost postal service to a luxury courier one. Another reason is that they are often open on a twenty-four hours basis and this is particularly useful when you need to buy in a drugstore. In my experience, last winter, I caught the flu and could not buy a proper medicine due to the fact that was a midnight. However, not only the online drugstore sold me a suitable cure, but it also made an immediate, within an hour, emergency shipment. Had I not got such an opportunity, I would never have got a chance to become healthy the very next day.

A strong argument can, of course, be made from the opposite position. It has been claimed that conventional stores could offer something different than just “buy goods after a money transaction”. This is due to the fact that a customer can ask a seller in person for an advice when choosing the right item. Furthermore, a buyer is able to touch a thing by his own hands and determine whether it is worth paying or not. A splendid instance here is a shoe shop. There, a customer who wants to make a good deal is allowed to check everything by him or her self and this is not achievable even via the most modern technologies such as 3d virtual reality and mobile instruments.

Having said that, presumably, online shopping brings an overall advantage in today's society. Therefore, in my opinion, it is not an unjustifiable assumption that its utilization should be encouraged, especially in terms of an international trading.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, of course, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84741144414 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89761743006 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629427792916 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2047468282 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122341951772 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426863598964 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578494876661 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823650475912 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663896128183 0.056905535591 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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