Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. However, some people think that friends are the most important influence on young people. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your opinion.
Family and friends are considered great influence on young adults. However, some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults and other people take the opposite view. In my opinion, family influences young adults more than anything.
Firstly, family makes our future. They taught us about habits and discipline which not only help is find a good job when we grow up bit also help us live better lives. Good habits and wide knowledge are factors that lead to success. For example, when I was in primary school, my parents used to forced me to do the homework or read a book for at least 30 minutes every night. Thanks to my parents, I have made a good habit of studying.
Secondly, family stay with us at any situation. We may have many friends or relations. They will definitely be with us in our happy times. However, only our family stay with us in our hard times because they understand us more than anyone else. Besides, if we are successful then some people get jealous of us, family encourages when we pass every step and always looks forward to our advance steps.
Last but not least, family has a considerable influence on our character and behaviours. For instance, if a father is an alcoholic and yells at his children constantly, those children will be quick-tempered as their father. Otherwise, if he always cares about his family, his children will become kind and caring people.
In conclusion, family is a major influence on our life. We should love them with all our hearts and make them a priority.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74169741697 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50807440514 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 37.7833329249 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3888888889 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262883266065 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874743962421 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131199944133 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156318613941 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192371958753 0.056905535591 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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