University life is the best period during a person' s entire life. To experience a successful university life renders a sweet memory to reminiscent in serenity. As to the importance of success in university, some people think affirmatively; nonetheless, others deem it is not necessary in contemporaty. Personally, I think that leading a successful university life is essential to the happiness afterward and everyone should attain success in university.
To start with, success in university is important because of the work after graduation. A successful university life generates a eye-catching curriculum vitae to apply for job. For example, a persuading resume provides a better opportunity to internal company than one with average grade. Therefore, undergraduates ought to achieve success in university.
Nevertheless, a contrary view believe that contrive to acquire success in university is futile. The main reason is that most graduates work in fields that not ralate to their major studied in university. A statistic shows that nearly 60% people work in occupation that is not their profession. It seems that there is no need to success in university nowadays.
In my opinion, success in university is requisite for job satisfaction. A successful university life engenders great possibility to work in professional eare and people are more satisfied with job when in profession than in unrelate field. Besides, a successful university life and a satisfied career converge to a happy life.
To recapitulate, a happy life is the desire of everybody, which commences from a successful university. Therefore, success in university is important. University students should contrive to attain success in university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... A successful university life generates a eye-catching curriculum vitae to apply ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59315589354 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3443609844 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51711026616 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 31.2089730687 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7222222222 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297513017425 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11211104338 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06486617177 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176863860451 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559682894002 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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