Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women

It is believed by some people that the suitability of certain jobs depend on the gender because they carious distinct personality characteristic .However, I completely disagree with the given statement.

I believe we are living in 2 century, where women are contributing enormously in each and every sector, job considered only for men in the past, are mostly done by women .Now it is accepted that qualities varies from person to person, it does not matter what the sex is. For example, nursing profession was mostly preferred by women in the past, but male nurses are commonly seen in hospitals. In other words, potential to do job does not entirely based on sex.

Secondly , evaluating women and men on their gender appears to be non-judgemental mind set , As this will create discrimination among sexes. For instance, if women are not allowed to work in specific jobs such as in army or navy, which are generally considered appropriate for men, I believe it will certainly raise a question of inequality among both sexes.

Thirdly, from last few decades , there is a switch , in the roles of parents, in past, men used to be bread winners and women spend most to the time in caring children and making food for family ,but the concept of househusbands and acceptability of women for every sectors reveals the fact that distinguishing sexes because of qualities does not prevails in present job market and such type of mind set does not holds water .

To recapitulate, I believe that the suitability of some jobs should not be considered on the basis of gender as potentials of people and desires for doing suitable jobs generally depend on their experiences , personal interest and life circumstances.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (18 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90573261703 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.103520398 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.75 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.75 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404713990837 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165594310668 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744064048568 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21716837735 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389865036939 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

It is believed by some people that the suitability of certain jobs depend on the gender because they carious distinct personality characteristic .However, I completely disagree with the given statement.

I believe in 21 century, women are contributing enormously in each and every sector. Job considered only for men in the past, are mostly done by women . it is a fact that qualities varies from person to person, it does not matter what the sex is. For example, nursing profession was mostly preferred by women in the past, but male nurses are commonly seen in hospitals. In other words, potential to do job does not entirely based on sex.

Secondly, evaluating women and men on their gender seems to be non-judgemental mind set, as this will create discrimination among sexes. For instance, if women are not allowed to work in specific jobs such as in army or navy, which are generally considered appropriate for men, I believe it will certainly raise a question of inequality among both sexes.

Thirdly, from last few decades, there is a switch, in the roles of parents, in past, men used to be bread winners and women spend most to the time in caring children and making food for family,but the concept of househusbands and acceptability of women for every sectors reveals the fact that distinguishing sexes because of qualities does not prevails in present job market and such type of mind set does not holds water.

To recapitulate, I believe that the suitability of job should not be considered on the basis of gender as potentials of people and their desire for doing suitable jobs generally depend on their experiences, personal interests and life circumstances.