Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Children usually inherit the qualities of better social being in their family. Personal evolution as a idle member of the society is totally depends on society’s ethics and schools might not have proper resources to teach inperson about the same. However, some people believe that school is the perfect place to learn socialism. I strongly believe in the notion that it is parent’s responsibility to teach their offspring how to earn individuals respect so that he or she would become a icon of the society.
To begin with, it is irrefutable fact that children mostly learn from their surroundings. In fact, they pass their most time with their family than in the school. Additionally, it is hard for the schools where students may come from different communities and it might possible that inclination towards some ethics may be different from society to society. For an example, it is not advisable in India due to it’s diverse society and vide cultural regime as most students come from the different faiths. Moreover, it is arduous and meandering process to segregate students as per their religion and teach them social values accordingly.
Secondly, most of the ethnic groups around the world believe in teaching their children at their own, in terms of social values, so that they would come-up as a society leader. Many grandparents also following and celebrating the ancient cultural occasions so that their generations would preserve their culture and social integrity, which directly or indirectly linkup with better member of the society. For example, Indians has been celebrating occasions since ages like the Divali, Ede, Onam because they want to pass religious values form generation to generation. They also believe these events are prominent particularly for the children to be a better social beings.
To conclude, I can say that it is mere responsibility of parents as limited resources and different beliefs are the root causes for education institutions. It is only the school’s responsibility, if children is admitted as a full time student and a way far from his family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... respect so that he or she would become a icon of the society. To begin with, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roundings. In fact, they pass their most time with their family than in the schoo...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...nsibility, if children is admitted as a full time student and a way far from his family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22873900293 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90374710211 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7644209209 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220580844719 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839902325597 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885523372043 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144466997903 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105219088804 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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