Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, think that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, think that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether it is the responsibility of parent to instill discipline and good behavior into their children or it is up the school to bring them up. As each part has some capabilities which the other side lacks, I think it is the combination of these two places that can give the best results.

Parents, as the first people who are in full contact with children, are the core part of their education. Before going to the school, children’s education which is vitally important is being done inside families. Even after the child goes to school, parents have a moral responsibility to observe their children’s behavior and take some measures into consideration if they see any disorder. Even with the children who are spending 10 hours a day at school, they still have majority of their time at home and they are spending the most crucial moments of their lives with their parents. So the striking role of parents in children’s upbringing cannot be underestimated.

On the other hand however, schools have never been about merely teaching science to the children; their behavioral problems always matters to teachers. The latter one’s importance is based on the fact that schools are the first place that children are dealing with each other; so it is crucially important that they learn how to treat their peers. Actually it can play a prototype of a simple society that they should live in later in their lives and school can play a very important role to instill the necessary skills into them regarding the issue. Furthermore, if an individual student has some kind of disorder or psychological problems, it is the duty of school to alert the parents and even more, take action if the parents are not caring about the alarms. According to all the aforementioned, I personally believe that parents and school can play as complement to each other and none of their roles can be underestimated.

In conclusion, the vital duty of upbringing children is on the parents in the first place but school can play a complementary role because children should be taught the social skills of living in the society as well as personal behaviors.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'in the first place', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235436893204 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.148058252427 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752427184466 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0558252427184 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0606796116505 0.0437548338989 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121359223301 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0412621359223 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87950020729 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291262135922 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00485436893204 0.00163938923432 296% => OK
Determiners: 0.106796116505 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218446601942 0.021408717616 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145631067961 0.011925033212 122% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2182.0 1933.35771543 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 316.048096192 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92934782609 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326086956522 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171195652174 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111413043478 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87950020729 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494565217391 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.4748480893 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 28.3076923077 20.7743622355 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7759221599 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.846153846 127.492653851 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3076923077 20.7743622355 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.814263465372 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.3076923077 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.50458715596 1.69124875643 89% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367874915753 0.332605444948 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125381159591 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0428267239689 0.0668466124924 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616848805455 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147397092233 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171019284228 0.134430193775 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361859198179 0.0742795772207 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.440611973158 0.324371583561 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0677986941035 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256147595569 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451490620934 0.058150111329 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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