Some people think that women should be able to do whatever job they are qualified for including police work, while others think that is it wrong to allow woman to become police officers.
What is your opinion?
Recently, the discrimination between male and female has been significantly obliterated and some kind of jobs has no longer male dominated. Although, some people believe that, specific jobs are suitable for woman bud some others consider that some kind of jobs such as police officer is not appropriate for a woman. In this essay I discuss both of the views, besides, in my perspective, the second group's opinion is more related to the modern world.
On the one hand, each gender has individual characteristic and based on that could do some type of job better. For instance, most of the women are good at taking care of people or cooking and they are more successful in being a nurse or a chief. What's more, men are strong and confident and act much more professional in being army or police officers. So, it might be true that some kinds of jobs are suitable base on the gender.
On the other hand, the different trends should not be neglected because of the gender. It means that talented person despite the gender might carry out a specific job successfully more than others' expectation. For example, a woman as a police officer might be so talented and capable of making a decision or designing plans as a professional male officer. To sum up, other people might think some jobs are suitable for specific gender but motivation and talent has a massive influence on doing the jobs despite what the gender is.
In conclusion, we debate two views of people and discuss why they have these beliefs, first of them argue that male and female can do same jobs equally if they are capable, the second group think that some jobs like a police officer are not suitable for a woman.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...successful in being a nurse or a chief. Whats more, men are strong and confident and ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228395061728 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.145061728395 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104938271605 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0586419753086 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0277777777778 0.0437548338989 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138888888889 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55536753013 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00617283950617 0.0326793684256 19% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00617283950617 0.00163938923432 377% => OK
Determiners: 0.117283950617 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0216049382716 0.021408717616 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00617283950617 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1684.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68918918919 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314189189189 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199324324324 0.28420135186 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135135135135 0.203846283523 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0810810810811 0.137316102897 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55536753013 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 53.3488902004 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6666666667 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5925997982 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 0.814263465372 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 44.5990990991 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.74666666667 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248484542069 0.332605444948 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111085723843 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0812640808029 0.0668466124924 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564429039559 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148019881377 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105152096655 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658130425785 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325320951758 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0644529169312 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176646609502 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212218511416 0.058150111329 36% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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