Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

Essay topics:

Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

This essay explains about the people traveling from one place to other place for the reason and benefits of journey.

Now a days, the world is shrinken and the people who are living in the world are easy to travel from one location to other location by comfort way of transport. During 19th century, the journey was very much difficult due to lack of motorized transport and less communication between the countries. At present, mode of transport is by road way such as car, bus, etc, sky way such as flight, helicopter, etc, sea way such as ship, boat, etc. So the mode of transports are also increased not like as previous day only depend upon road way and using the horses, camels, bulls, etc for transport. The major difference between the previous days traveling is time duration. The traveling time is very very less as we can travel a distance of 500km in 5 hours by train and 1 hours by flight. So here the main concerns are time duration and long distance. Both we have achieved in comfort way. So lot of people used to travel from one place to other place without hesitation.

Because of easy transport and comfort in journey, the travelers are getting lot of benefits such as communication between two countries or place, trading and tourism. The economic strength of the country as some place are mainly depends upon the traders and tourism. For the above two things, communication is also joined as third important role of the country. Due to easy traveling now a days, the travelers can do their business in highest and economic way.

As we compared to the previous days now we have been developed very much in trading and tourism as well. Because of people are traveling than ever before.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... the reason and benefits of journey. Now a days, the world is shrinken and the people w...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... reason and benefits of journey. Now a days, the world is shrinken and the people w...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
...is time duration. The traveling time is very very less as we can travel a distance of 500...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...n. The traveling time is very very less as we can travel a distance of 500km in 5 ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...e of the country. Due to easy traveling now a days, the travelers can do their business in...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... the country. Due to easy traveling now a days, the travelers can do their business in...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
...rs can do their business in highest and economic way. As we compared to the previous...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ry much in trading and tourism as well. Because of people are traveling than ever befor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274626865672 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.116417910448 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0985074626866 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0567164179104 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0149253731343 0.0437548338989 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15223880597 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.044776119403 0.0403226058552 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49808703757 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238805970149 0.0326793684256 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0805970149254 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00597014925373 0.021408717616 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00298507462687 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1710.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68106312292 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305647840532 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255813953488 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176079734219 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.093023255814 0.137316102897 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49808703757 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.2446667582 60.7387585426 79% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8125 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7288330558 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.814263465372 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.3938953488 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.50793650794 1.69124875643 148% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341783693791 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128097086541 0.102741220458 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0915733955597 0.0668466124924 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515264321307 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19707792806 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15772275574 0.134430193775 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959624826991 0.0742795772207 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.391585106299 0.324371583561 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0878495259758 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251446663375 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341980780534 0.058150111329 59% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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