Nowadays, Tourism is a large, fast-growing, and significantly expanding sector in all the corner of the world. Although some people claim that tourism has some drawbacks because it destroys our mother nature and causes damage to the local places. However, I strongly disagree with this concept as tourism has paramount importance in many forms which will be discussed with relevant examples.
Admittedly, there are many reasons why tourism has a huge contribution to the local economy. First and foremost, from the employment perspective, it has become a source of income for many people to have a better life. Another significant argument in favor is that this has helped in reducing poverty lines and the rate of crimes in most of the nations. A recent survey conducted by local authorities reveals that 40% of the local people are able to educate their children because of the income earned from tourism business. Therefore, the life of the local people can be improved if the government supports tourism to a larger extent.
Another reason is that tourism plays a vital role in nurturing the economy of the country. This means that if a nation attracts a large number of tourists then this will ultimately benefit the state authorities. Furthermore, with this large turnover budget, public services such as health departments, local roads, and infrastructure can be improved. Thus, money from these revenues can be put to a better cause in order to save the environment and make healthy societies.
In conclusion, tourism development does not harm the environment parts or bring destruction to the economy rather it supports the nation to develop further by promoting employment and becoming a contributor to the state budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19217081851 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84080737604 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3320024253 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179362544846 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614330583953 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376581252899 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100391340174 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352588410117 0.056905535591 62% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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