A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Essay topics:

A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Quite often people talk about the gender inequality in university education. Should university reserve the equal seats for male and female students in each course? I believe that admission for subjects should be based on merits not on gender reservation. I shall explain why I think like this.

Some people who agree with equal reservation seat in university education have some valid points. To begin with, such arrangement will promote education for women. Except developed countries, women are still struggling for the basic rights and equality. They are not given enough opportunity to study or work. As a consequence, either they do not get enough marks to compete for university education or become diffident to face the challenges. Reserving equal seat for female students will provide opportunity to consider higher education. Furthermore, some of the high employment oriented subjects like computer, communication etc. are still dominated by the male students around the world. As a result, female ratio at workplace is alarming low in these sectors. To reduce such gap, provision to admit same no of male and female students in every subject may work.

However, others believe that admission in university should be based on the merits and qualification. University course are specialized courses and require pre- requisite knowledge to start the study. Non merits candidates both male and female may not be able understand the subject during study. Resulting more drop out from university. In addition, non-availability of particular gender students will cause vacant seats in subjects. It has been seen observed that some of the subjects are not preferred by particular gender. In such scenario, available seats of subject will go waste. Also, such reservation system will create disparity in the education system.

To conclude, giving opportunity to both genders is important. But in higher education, merit should be given the preference over maintaining the gender equality. To promote the equality, government may organize the special preparation classes for both male and female students.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47400611621 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87039184469 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2985560071 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.08 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24047153061 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639100883089 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641912319345 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147807824417 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613853989434 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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