The use of cctv cameras in street, station, shops and other public places has increased rapidly in recent years. Although we are told that these cameras help in the fight against crime, some people are opposed to their use. They believe that everyone has a right to privacy. What are your views?
Different types of crimes are being committed in every part of world and it has become absolutely necessary to prevent these crimes using available means like CCTV, alarms etc. Lately, usage of CCTV has increased in multifolds at various places such as residential, commercial and public. It is considered that these CCTV helps to monitor the situation and solve the crime mystery as well. Even though, some people are against of using these devices at different locations. I shall both viewpoints.
People who do not support the installation of CCTV camera at popular places have some points. At first, people are not warned everywhere that they are under the CCTV surveillance and it gives a chance to camera operator to capture the private talk or action. As a result, people are vulnerable to blackmailing or other social problems. Also, analysis of captured images or video may divulge the trend of individuals or places and accordingly plan can be hatched to trap the person where these monitor devices are not available.
However, majority of people are in favour to use CCTV camera and believe that lots of crimes can be prevented. The primary reason to use CCTV is round the clock monitoring and availability of data for future references. Big shopping malls, stations etc… are heavily relying on the CCTV footage which helps them to find out the exact locations and keep them aware about the latest situation. For example, London tube stations are monitored by CCTV camera and in case of any suspicion; police personnel reach within time and control the situation before getting worse. Another reason is that people have fear of being monitored and hesitate to do any kind of illegal activities where these cameras are installed. For instance, Oxford Street is under surveillance and crime rate is close to null.
In conclusion, CCTV camera is one of the effective ways to monitor the places and it assists the security staff to know what is happening where. Some people may have some reservation because of privacy but I believe that security is more important than individual’s privacy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...n every part of world and it has become absolutely necessary to prevent these crimes using available...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0659025788 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66827262857 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567335243553 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6816891317 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348353624388 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104425999872 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553572258419 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197701136581 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439436101708 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.