We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology had provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine.
To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with this its use?
Nuclear energy is dangerous or beneficial for mankind is still the conflicting topic. Though some people believe that benefits can be drawn from wise use of nuclear energy, even after knowing the scale of destruction it caused in Japan. I think that benefits outweigh the disadvantages in using the nuclear energy.
People who oppose any kind of usage of nuclear energy have some valid reference points. First of all, in 1945 when nuclear bomb was dropped in Japan, resulted mass killing of people, particularly Japanese young men, women and children. This incident still witnesses the gruesome after effect of nuclear energy. Secondly, considering that people would use it for welfare of mankind, it is well known fact that any mistake in dealing with nuclear sources may again cause similar kinds of destruction in world. For example, nuclear substances leakage in Iran killed few people on the spot and proactive action was taken which saved others life.
However, nuclear energy has demonstrated many advantages to the world. The most important one is in the field of medical science. Nowadays, fatal diseases like cancer etc. are cured by the therapy which uses the radioactive rays emanates from nuclear source. These rays not only heal the cancer but also improve the cell life in human body. In addition, it could be the game changer for energy sector. Most of energy in these days are extracted using the fossil fuel such as coal, petroleum etc. which is damaging the environment. Environmentalists often suggest to find the renewable source of energy and strictly advise to not to use the fossil fuel, especially coal which after burning destroy the layers in nature.
To conclude, Nuclear energy has many benefits in field of medicine, producing energy which can provide light in thousands of rural areas in developed or under-developed country. Nevertheless, its use in war can do mass destruction in world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'substances'' or 'substance's'?
Suggestion: substances'; substance's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion was taken which saved others life. However, nuclear energy has demonstrated...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest finding'.
Suggestion: suggest finding
...he environment. Environmentalists often suggest to find the renewable source of energy and stri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14968152866 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.634612728 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2655971375 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1052631579 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157650290124 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490095605602 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329579162474 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982493490655 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355063555153 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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