Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with thís opinion?
The more crimes of violence have, the less secure we have. Therefore, capital punishment is a necessary method to control cruelty in society and keep the better life.
Nowaday, there are many cases about violent felonies. Those are killing someome to get their assets or plan to murder the relatives due to conflict. If there are no way to stop such kind of incidents, it will affect to the society livelihood. Hence, capital punishment is essential to condemn people who create these savage actions.
Besides, I think that the death penalty is the only way to punish the criminals as they commit felony. For instance, a men brutally raped and murdered a baby girl who was only 11 years old in Japan. In addition, a comedian Vietnam was sentenced to sexual abuse with boys. These dehumanizing actions directly affect to victims in body and spirit. So capital punishment, the highest penalty, is strongly need to reduce, eliminate crimes who can't not educated.
Another benefit of the death penalty is save the budget to keep prisons working. Fund which were used to educate criminal, to pay for polices, refreshman, eletricity…were very high. If the government pay money to take care of people who should be death, they will lose lots of money meaninglessly. Therefore, capital punishment is a good way to save the budget. The government can use that money to improve economic or advance awarness of people.
To summarise, capital punishment is important to decrease the crime rate and to procide the secrured life. Without it, we have to use excessive violence to limit the violence. It will not safe for everybody.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00367647059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7061595726 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8872709943 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6315789474 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232980370366 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620108722414 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653242781013 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132510921061 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625127826665 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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