You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you in a radiant of health and the best of spirits. I am so sorry for my delaying in replying to you. During these days, I was gauging your situation and your personal traits.
Actually, it is an imperative decision which can affect your destinate. So, we have to consider all aspects before making any decision. If I recall my memory, during our teenage, you got so fed up with study and you used to find a loophole to flee from curricular. I can predict with absolute evidence that attending academical courses couldn’t be impactful for you.
Besides, you were very keen on car and its related issues like luxury cars or antique cars and their difference in power of their motors and so on. From my perspective, if you chose to pursue your dream, you would be successful with no doubt. An obvious argument in its favor is that you were precocious in subjects of car.
I suppose that you can continue in majors related to car such as car exhibition or car repairing. At first you should do an internship at least for four years and during this period you must save your money. After that you could establish a business for your own and your business will be blooming in near future since you have a knack for in issues of car.
I hope my advice could help you to do your best. Please no hesitate for more information. I am waiting to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Sahar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, so, at least, i suppose, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50193050193 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44599394138 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9624330001 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5882352941 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175790803747 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620633854747 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418340446216 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113244259098 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266638278576 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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