The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centers. It is feared that this trend can bring negative influences on the youths and the society.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary era, shopping centers have become the best source of pastime activity. It is believed that most youths are spending their free time at shopping centers which could bring negativity not only to themselves but also to society. It certainly spread universal negativity because teenagers always comparing themselves with others, in turn, the comparison would bring negativity. Another reason is, it is believed by some ethnic groups that youth gathered there to perform some unsocial activities.
It is believed that comparing oneself to others is the curse human being ever had. If youth at their maturity age learn this, they probably never would eradicate this trait in their lifespan. Comparing themselves with other affluent society’s class would make them feel inferiority and thus bring negative emotions. For example, in India, shopping centers have been a great source of passing youths’ leisure time. For this reason many of the adolescences trying to copy other’s fashion, but they forgot to check up on their economic boundaries and keep pestering their parents about the same. When parent defies them then it eventually ended up with the inferiority complex.
Consequently, heavy inflow of the youngster at shopping centers could harm the society’s reputation as they gather there for some group activities like smoking and enjoying tobaccos. Additionally, shopping centers have become the favorite spot for the lovers also. For example, Mumbai is the city of malls and spacious shopping centers, this gives youth a chance to spend as many hours as they want with all the facilities they needed for free. Many of the city’s boys meet there to enjoy group smoking or various cocaine. Moreover, most colleges couples also spend a good time at this place. These malice activities present a very bad impression of Indian societies.
To deduce, above two examples clearly dictate that how shopping centers welcome and develop negativities at individual’s level as well as the societies’ level. It is a viable option to pose some entry fees at shopping centers, which can be reimbursed if one would buy something within the premises to stop being shopping centres as youths favorite pastime place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'would' and 'eradicate'.
Suggestion: would never eradicate
... maturity age learn this, they probably never would eradicate this trait in their lifespan. Comparing...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pestering their parents about the same. When parent defies them then it eventually e...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...become the favorite spot for the lovers also. For example, Mumbai is the city of mal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38309859155 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79369880717 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.833720601 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212623687198 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669997918335 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053288434886 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134413021317 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258208658919 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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