Advertising influence people's behavior in a negative way?
Trades, brands and advertising, these three words are very popular today's. If you want to be a well known brads you should pay more attention to your advertisements. But have you ever thought about negative and positive effects of advertisement on the people's behavior? Side of me there are numerous bad impacts on human attitudes.
First i can say posting is very necessary way of selling your products. Because people mostly decide to buy new things according to their polarities. And when advertisements appear on the TV for new things to many times, it gets in the human brains as much as quick as a back-round information. So when you go to a market suddenly you can choose one stuff without searching or comparing prices with other products because of your brain tricks. It means that sometimes advertising provoke the humanity to push on to buy staff without interrogate.Therefore generally people waste their money to buy the poor quality products hence advertisement's deceives.
Secondly some times advertising included some different picture, icons or slogans that effect the people or especially children behaviors badly. For instance in one chocolate advertising one popular actor acts with an unusual clothes. This should be very dangerous scene morally. Or sometimes it should give subliminal message which not directly ruin the generations morality.
As sum up the best way to introduce your product is advertising. But not break the cultural rules and not damage the people psychologically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25619834711 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0753797362 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3626670024 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219166384492 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647691953688 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792563378054 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123214296835 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0079515211177 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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