Compare and contrast the advantages of city living and country living. Defend your preference.
There is a great deal of strong points to live in the city. Firstly it is opportunity to find any work you want, to choose the best company, conditions and get the job with preferred timetable. There are a lot of educational institutions. Inasmuch as we spend a one third of our life being at work, it is an important point in making a decision.
Secondary at the city you may find lots of entertainment centers for any favor: jazz cafes, concerts, museums, theatres, libraries, clubs, sport fields. After work it is easy to go to your sport and do it twice and three times a week. If it’s not ...
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it is opportunity to find any work you want
it has opportunities to find any work you want
Among disadvantages of living in big cities are air pollution,
The disadvantages of living in big cities are air pollution,
However living in the country is more difficult way to progress professionally
However living in the country has more difficulties to progress professionally
Sentence: Banks, post offices, telecommunication centers and other points is where you may solve your problems or choose a necessary service.
Description: The fragment and other points is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: Friends just come in and ask if anybody at home.
if anybody is at home.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5
better to have 5 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 474 350
No. of Characters: 2134 1500
No. of Different Words: 261 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.666 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.502 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.621 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.52 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.519 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.266 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5