Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?

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Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?

In the First, the way of our parents life have a lot of things positive and negative in it , such us our life now a day .both of them have bright and dark side .

My Parents life in the past was so simple, the Technology was in the first stage there is just TV or Radio the distraction instrument not lot, I remember my mother told me that the TV channels was limited just two or three channel and there program finish in early time . and the obsess with appetences is less than now , in addition to , there is a lot of time to spend with family , laugh together , eat and chat with the family member , the familial correlation strong .

The disadvantage of my parents life is there community was closed , for example when they did a research they can depended in just the offer book they can find them in the library, despite of that they have a lot of time to read books and novels , my mother told me in the past when they have a holiday they take novels and read it that’s make their language and grammar more powerful.

In the other hand , when we talk about our life there is a lot of advantage in it , such as the Technology is more development and the communication instrument now a valuable and the transportation instrument more development such us cars, airplane and a lot of things that’s make our life more easily but more faster the time pass away we can't feel in it ,now the time we spend with family is little because of social media make us busy . Despite of that when we need a specific book or research we can easily fond it in the internet.

The conclusion , I think the life is better for next generation is our life in specific sides such us can benefit from technology but not spend all the time in it and depend on it , because make them less productivity and there mind doesn’t working in good way . we can benefit from our parents life in specific sides such us read more books spend more time with family .

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245524296675 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.074168797954 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562659846547 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.107416879795 0.0685040099705 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122762148338 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0102301790281 0.0351676179071 29% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.41213483652 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0076726342711 0.0309702414327 25% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0895140664962 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153452685422 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102301790281 0.0139019557991 74% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1965.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18469656992 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.221635883905 0.338922669872 65% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.158311345646 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110817941953 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0606860158311 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41213483652 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398416886544 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.2067524682 59.2087087015 70% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6684587814 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.375 20.5533526081 230% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 118.325557256 48.84282405 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.625 120.699889404 204% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.375 20.5533526081 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.54480286738 667% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.2061345646 45.7405998639 138% => OK
Elegance: 1.28695652174 1.45489161554 88% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209835536755 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.208365318088 0.103427244359 201% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0662846604161 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.811180481604 0.497263757937 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167107085459 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133513362966 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624584068215 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.370485342923 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0758237985099 0.067059652881 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164094757145 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055826616219 0.0618886996521 90% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK

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Rates: 63 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 19 Out of 30