Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should spend most of their time on studying and playing, and they shouldn’t be required to help family with household chores, such as cleaning and cooking.
Throughout history, parents’ behavior toward their children has been a controversial debt among parents. Some parents may hold the view that children should spend most of their time on studying and playing. However, some others may take an opposite view and believe that children should help their parents with household chores. From my perspective, the second belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the outstanding reasons.
First of all, assigning household chores to children makes them more responsible, because when they are assigned to do something special, they should plan for that and finally they should do them on time regarding the deadline. So, it helps them to do some task’s antecedents on time to meet the parents’ expectations. In addition, I firmly believe that this assignment has great effects on children’s features in the future, and they can accept some responsibilities earlier than the other children. For example, when I was a child, I helped my parents with household chores. After that, when I was a student in high school, I became the mayor of the school. I think it was rooted in my responsibility to do some household chores because after them I became familiar with having a responsibility to do something special.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that assigning household chores helps children to manage themselves when they will be independent. Professor Grey in Berkeley University conducted some research among students who lived in the dormitories. He defined some measures to measure students’ abilities to manage themselves and activities in the dormitories. His results were fantastic and exploratory. He found out students who had done household chores when they were children, were more successful in the dormitories. Also, he mentioned that life for them in the dormitories was easier and more comfortable. After reading this article, I compared myself with my roommates and I found out the results were correct in my country context.
Furthermore, assigning household chores helps children to cope with laziness. Children are usually lazy and obese by getting addicted to television with the lack of physical exercises, and absolutely this assignment helps them to be more active. For example, I have a brother who is two years older than me. My parents did not allow him to do household chores because he was the first child. When he was a child, he was overweight, because his lifestyle was similar to a couch-potato.
Briefly, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to a conclusion that assigning household chores to children helps them to be more responsible and they will live easier in the future. I highly recommend that parents should assign some household chores to children for improving their abilities in the future. By this way, children would be more responsible and they would be able to solve their problem easily in the future, and I believe they will be a successful person in their life careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19712525667 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9807090724 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455852156057 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.438353869 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3461538462 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7307692308 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278074552442 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852152495862 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755581488238 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17522174621 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600446973086 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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