Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? Dancing Plays An Important Role In A Culture. Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer. (corrected)
When faced with this question, quite a few with a perfunctory glance would claim they cannot discover important connection between dancing and culture, but when it comes to me, I strongly support the trace of dancing in culture. It is traced in various aspects of human's life like, parties, celebrities, festivals, wedding and ceremonies. People express their emotions, culture, history through music and dance. There is no need to language because it is rest on intuitive understanding. The supporting bases of my reasons are cultural and overall.
According to cultural view, Music and dancing of each country contain valuable cultural and historical characteristic. Music and dance convey this concepts through nature of dancing, garments, instruments and emotions. Everyone can find trace of his/her history and legends in the festivals, dances, rituals and operas. For example, Azerbaijani dancing has very fast rhythms and demands completely grace and limber body. Each movement of men's dance demonstrates a kind of fighting technique including dancing with sword, fast movements and jumps. In contrast, women's soft movements and rhythms movements along with singing portrays manual gathering of gripe from orchards. Therefore, dancing is a significant medium to introduction of cultural and historical events.
Consistent with overall view, Dancing is an inducement for economic promotion and countries become advantageous from dancing and musical occurrences. For example, Manual dance festivals, musical and dancing programs that are performed in parallel with sport leagues like Olympic and world wide soccer matches attract lots of people from all over the world as tourist. In consequence, it brings good income for conductor countries. Besides, in musical programs and concerts, a part of this income or whole of it is donated to needy people in poor countries. Some of musical movements are conducted as a symbol of remonstrance against social events or war and boost humanism and human' culture. In addition, as you know today some of old ceremonies gradually wipe out because of migration to cities. Traditional dancing festivals help to stop elimination of ritual and old-styled dancing ceremonies and make them more familiar to other people. Thus, overall advantages of music and dancing are unavoidable.
In conclusion, some people at first glance find it a little hard to see obvious bond between dance and culture, but as I mentioned above There are little and big credits that show worthiness of dance and music in every culture. Due to numerous argues including cultural and overall ones, I personally support merit of dance in important aspects of culture.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'kind of', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.303418803419 0.229887763892 132% => OK
Verbs: 0.117521367521 0.158761421928 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115384615385 0.0866891130778 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0213675213675 0.046263068375 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0320512820513 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138888888889 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0363247863248 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83023153959 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0213675213675 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00213675213675 0.00188951952338 113% => OK
Determiners: 0.0491452991453 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00641025641026 0.0209618222197 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00854700854701 0.0139019557991 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2683.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 416.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44951923077 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.454326923077 0.338922669872 134% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.379807692308 0.251872472559 151% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.242788461538 0.174417080927 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158653846154 0.112833075102 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83023153959 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.1802435576 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9090909091 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2782054758 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.954545455 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 56.8898601399 45.7405998639 124% => OK
Elegance: 2.8 1.45489161554 192% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241778546023 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0995585509504 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0633015659795 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494925091033 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132137688494 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954707208048 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415820761565 0.0781384742642 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.427540438317 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0600183246286 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182741171073 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211669815501 0.0618886996521 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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