Of course, few would say that a strict rule about clothing in schools or work places is unnecessary requirement because it can have a negative influence on students or employees, such as a source of stress. From my view, however, we cannot ignore advantages of uniform, encouraging workers’ safety and improving students’ academic performance.
To begin, it is undeniable that safety at work should be provided people when they are working. When it comes to sloppy conditions in workplace, it can result to injuries of employees. It is possible that the employees make mistakes, however, the company has more responsible for these situations because it cannot provide them with safety circumstances. For instance, an employee who works at a manufacturing factory, there are several possibilities that the worker can be injured by an automatic machine with his unsuitable clothes. Thus, a rule of wearing safe clothes should be required to every employees. This shows that we cannot underestimate the importance of a requirements of clothing, especially at work places.
Furthermore, offering a uniformed clothing to students can play a vital role in promoting students’ academic performances. Admittedly, there are several distractions to prevent students from focusing on their studying when schools allow them to wear what they want. Otherwise, if they do not have to concern about clothing, it can result to an improvement of their concentrations in studying. According to a survey conducted by a team of researchers at Harvard University, the surveyed students who wear their clothes in school without any constraint mentioned that they spend lots of time to select their clothes in every morning. The survey also found that when students were prohibited from selecting their clothes, their concentration improved by twenty percent, and they performed better in exams than they were allowed to select clothes freely.
To sum, despite of the benefit of wearing clothes freely, both increasing of safety at work places and enhancing of students’ academic performance tell us that a rule of wearing adequately clothes at work and school should be required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a requirement' or simply 'requirements'?
Suggestion: a requirement; requirements
... cannot underestimate the importance of a requirements of clothing, especially at work places....
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Line 3, column 857, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... were allowed to select clothes freely. To sum, despite of the benefit of wearin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245524296675 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.16368286445 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0511508951407 0.0866891130778 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0664961636829 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145780051151 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0588235294118 0.0351676179071 167% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14427446921 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332480818414 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0690537084399 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0306905370844 0.0209618222197 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179028132992 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2184.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 340.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42352941176 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.435294117647 0.338922669872 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.35 0.251872472559 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.258823529412 0.174417080927 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170588235294 0.112833075102 151% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14427446921 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.2115869359 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2857142857 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.575999805 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 120.699889404 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 59.2857142857 45.7405998639 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.64485981308 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393821256123 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117843544813 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724474037486 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543674012327 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164324224784 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153833871956 0.114077575197 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677379274345 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240890026643 0.336927656856 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0314564302059 0.067059652881 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249741794517 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662998731511 0.0618886996521 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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