Our experiences sometimes look very puzzling and complicated at the time, and those might make us feel frustrated and disappointed, but a golden quote used to say "No pain, no gain," and I heartily believe, this is true. I must admit that I have found, for no doubt our hard time and experiences become valuable lessons for the future. I can say this on which the next paragraphs will elaborate.
First of all, when a circumstance seems kind of challenging for us, it means that we should find a way to deal with that harsh situation. As a result, we should use our previous understandings and also we should ask for a steering or try to create innovative way which is appropriate for our current situation. Logically, This procedure will make us stronger since it develops our critical thinking and makes us solution-oriented. For example, when I moved to the USA, I faced a real challenge since that was a first time I should have lived without my family. It seemed dreadful in the beginning, and made me pessimistic and frustrated. But little by little, I had started to take small steps moving forward and make my life satisfying versus the past. Now I perceive that we all should be courageous to take care of our self through the life's vicissitudes and I am certain that that experience has made me more vigorous.
Additionally, if you want to overcome the awkward situations and obstacles, you should trigger your hidden potentials which were not available before. Consequently, you will have faith in yourself after passing some hard conditions and you will feel confidence since you have found you inner value as a human. It is evident you will recognize this point that you should depend only on yourself and it will accelerate your sense of responsibility. For instance, a couple of years ago, I read a book which name was Choice Theory. That book changed my life due to it stated that if you are human, it means, you have enough power to handle your life by using your past experiences, accordingly, everything in your life will change if you discern that you are the only person who is liable for your life. That book's stuck in my mind and remind me that I should take advantages of my past knowledge and encounters to accomplish future intense situation which might happen in my life.
All in all, I am convicted that if you are encountering with tricky happenings, it means that you are discovering some novelties, and such circumstances lead you to flowering new capabilities, expertise, and abilities. Finally, I can say everybody should be grateful for his/her present distresses since those will be great treasures for the future's affairs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...quote used to say 'No pain, no gain,' and I heartily believe, this is true. ...
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Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...power to handle your life by using your past experiences, accordingly, everything in your life w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, look, so, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83442265795 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89659425149 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538126361656 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.800346052 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.277777778 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204623594717 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666352168488 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650187030255 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130615917589 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541960747624 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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