Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Although at the first glance, it seems that people are feeling unsatisfied about what they have, I take another view. I think what people feel about their things is mainly affected by the government’s policies. I will try to make this issue more clear by presenting following reasons.
First reason which is most important one, is about modern economics. In this modern world, governments try to produce and invent new things and support universities and research groups in order to enhance the level of technology. Many research groups are working on hi-tech devices such as mobile phones, cars , and etc. by providing people with new things, people are satisfied to try new devices. This issue are done by advertising which will be illustrated in the next paragraph.
Secondly, television, radio, newspapers,and etc. are trying to seduce people to buy hi-tech devices more and more. I think people can be easily affected by advertising. That’s why governments supports social networks and try to globalize them. By advertising, governments can earn much more money. Social networks in most cases are in the side of companies. There is a agreement between them saying that companies supports these networks and networks seduce people to by companies’ goods.
Finally, although, advertising, companies and government have great roles to cause people to buy more and more, I think people themselves are looking for new things to make their lives more easier. They want more time out of work to spend with their families. For this issues, they appreciate hi-tech devices which able them to have more times.
In conclusion, life will become more beautiful and easier when we try to use correctly from what we have at this moment. Producing newer things and devices could not make life easier. On the other hand, government should reduce number of hi-tech companies and should support global health issues instead.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mainly affected by the government's policies. I will try to make this issue ...
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...In this modern world, governments try to produce and invent new things and suppor...
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Suggestion: ,
...tech devices such as mobile phones, cars , and etc. by providing people with new t...
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Suggestion: etc.
...h devices such as mobile phones, cars , and etc. by providing people with new things, pe...
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Suggestion: , and
... Secondly, television, radio, newspapers,and etc. are trying to seduce people to buy...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...Secondly, television, radio, newspapers,and etc. are trying to seduce people to buy hi-t...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... are in the side of companies. There is a agreement between them saying that comp...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...king for new things to make their lives more easier. They want more time out of work to spe...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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... work to spend with their families. For this issues, they appreciate hi-tech devices...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in most cases', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242424242424 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.179063360882 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0964187327824 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0385674931129 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0495867768595 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.099173553719 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0413223140496 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74561840886 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385674931129 0.0309702414327 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0413223140496 0.0887237588012 47% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220385674931 0.0209618222197 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0220385674931 0.0139019557991 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1929.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 312.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18269230769 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391025641026 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25641025641 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179487179487 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13141025641 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74561840886 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 56.6181781557 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8571428571 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8482469332 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 40.4981684982 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.43298969072 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20248421393 0.300154397459 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0851252869152 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0643021311312 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464628610241 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139093219435 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707163399746 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579511826907 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278408669222 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482104491849 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134106312108 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556176476007 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.