Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In a busy life, some people will think playing game is a negative addiction or such a waste of time, while others say that games are their hobbies and through that they also can learn a lot. Playing games in the right way, in my opinion, can benefit us in some aspects, such as: improving attention, boosting creativity, also developing social skills. In other words, games teach us about life.
Firstly, playing games helps us improve our attention. The games teach us how to set plans, focus minds and energy in small objectives to reach the ultimate goals. A recent study showed some certain types of brain training games can improve working memory, and improve attention in children with ADHD (Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder) or in the elderly. Sudoku puzzles, for example, is a very popular brain training game of all time. The game challenges us to fill in the grid with keyboard so that every row, column and 3x3 box contains the digits 1 to 9, without repeating. To win Sudoku puzzles, players need use logic and deductive reasoning effectively under limited time, thus teaches them to concentrate the mind and effort towards a particular activity in a particular time. Therefore, playing games, in some case, can help people pay better attention and do better in class or while studying, and in other activities as well.
Secondly, games help us to stimulate the mind and boost creativity. According to media researches, games are not just for entertainment alone, but also bring different kinds of energy that make a person more analytical, which is crucial to creativity. In fact, to conquer a game, players need to pass its challenges as quick as impossible (most of games has a certain amount of time). In some parts, there is more than one solution to solve a problem, thus encourage player to find the best and fastest one. Football, for example, often needs us to find new ideas for problem solving. You just have 90 minutes to defeat the component, so creative and effective ways to play are necessary. Try to come up with a situations in different ways can expand our thinking capabilities. The more you experiment and try solving new types of problems or puzzles, the more you will know how your brain best works under circumstances requiring original thought.
Thirdly, through playing, we learn and develop essential social skills like: leadership skill, teamwork skill, time management skill… Some of the key element of playing games are exactly the kinds of things that a person need to be a succeed leader, or member. For example, action games require you to recruit allies, focus on your strength and power to defeat the bad buys…As a leader, you also need the kind of skills to recruit members, build and lead the teams. You need to know where to find the resources that will make your team stronger, or how to organize your team in the most effective way to achieve the goals. As a member, you need to learn how to cooperate with other people to complement each other’s strengths. Time management is also important skill which you are taught through playing. Because most of games set a limited time to complete a challenge or a level, players who can manage the time effectively, can easier to gain the success.
Furthermore, playing games, we can learn about handling success and failure. In daily life and work, we experience both win and loss, but if we keep focusing on original goals, we are bound to come out as winners in the long run.
In conclusion, anything too much is not good. Playing games can be good ideas for learning when we choose suitable games, and schedule time reasonable. To have a good health, we should balance outdoor games which can active our bodies with video one. Playing games in the right way not only help us maintain physical and mental wellbeing, but also teaches us worthy things about life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the games') or simply say ''most games''.
Suggestion: most of the games; most games
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Suggestion: As
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as for', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244708994709 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.157407407407 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0899470899471 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042328042328 0.046263068375 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0912698412698 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0291005291005 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5435306774 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042328042328 0.0309702414327 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00396825396825 0.00188951952338 210% => OK
Determiners: 0.0767195767196 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3888.0 2387.08602151 163% => OK
No of words: 665.0 408.028673835 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84661654135 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07814867018 4.48200974243 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332330827068 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254135338346 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168421052632 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0962406015038 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5435306774 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 212.727598566 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493233082707 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 62.9687804453 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1666666667 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3925608634 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.766666666667 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 47.5802005013 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.47593582888 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326140190052 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0999208178509 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0529133001821 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487353980936 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139219169942 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11473961273 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557900186787 0.0781384742642 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364773913174 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111461105593 0.067059652881 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200904332725 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447272185932 0.0618886996521 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8870967742 210% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 25.0 8.42114695341 297% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 29.0 13.6433691756 213% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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