Communicative power is the real power in job sector or corporate sector. Education is one of the basic element to communicate with other sector people. As far as i am concerned, i agree with the following statement which is ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school to get success in future job. The reasons for my view is go as follows.
To begin with, modern world are more competitive than previous time. People are more evaluate the ability to communicate well or relate well to other people than educational certificate. When comparison between two same profile person than who have the capability to communicate better he win the race. My own experience is a good example of this. When i was completed my graduation than me and my three friend are go for a interview, my friends are better student in academically but i got the job because my communicative power is better than my friends.
Secondly, those people who have the power to relate other with in short time, they can convince very well to the other people for fulfill his purpose. Those people who work at marketing job convincing power is the main tools to make positive result. If a person have got MBA degree but have very little relate power he facing problem in job sector. For example, my friend have got a big dill but he don't make it successful, when his boss hard that news he approach personally and got the dill. Moreover, tn that case experience and communicative power do the favor.
Finally, study hard in educational life is the basic need to get success in job life. Educational qualification are the primary quality to judge you. Communicative power give you that opportunity to relate very well with in the job field, it also reduce the effort to get success.
In sum, above the discussion it clear that convincing power are more important to get success in job field than education level. that's why i fill that way.
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... field than education level. thats why i fill that way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72434017595 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67524555785 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489736070381 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.918742748 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7894736842 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316678316985 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101088270422 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11643867608 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189795582074 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893680706621 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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