Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that since the dawn of civilization, sports and social activities has played a prevailing role in every individual's life. Perhaps the most important milepost of the university is gaining informations; besides, sports and social works are as significant as classes and libraries. The inevitable question which has always caused heated debate among academicians is whether at universities, sports are just as important as classes and should receive financial supprt or not. Therefore, a plethora of people are the leading proponents of the claim that the college is a place only for gathering data, reading books and don't need to hold any sports or social activities. Whereas others hold the exact opposite perspective and bellieve that sports are as essential as libraries and these activites need financial supports. I am, contrary to the first convention, inclinded toward the opinion that universities need sports and social activities just as they need classes and libraries. To substanciate my point of view, the following paragraphs will aptly elucidate a cursary glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that students espesially M.s and PhD students need sports and social activities like:football, basketball, body building, swimming, etc. for refreshing their mood in the weekends. This activities assist them do their works in a best way, so the more doing sport, the more developing in their fields. It is a very important that student have a good mood in the university and college. Take a personal experience as an example; when I was a student in university, i went to club every monday and swimmed in pool. This sport helped me to more relax during the semesters so that I get a very high mark in semesters. The swimming has a very incredible role in my life, my work, my grade which I got them.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that sports not only help students refreshing their mood but also help them revelotionised their life. Social activities help students boost their posetive steem, for when a person do sports inside of his work, a great amount ao dopamine is released in his mind. Dopamine is an especial harmone that is responsible for creating the sense of self-steeming in mind. As a result sports increase the secreting of hormones and eradicate negetive self confidence.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that for developing sports in universities, the authorities of universites manage to decide social activites need to be focused in the hieraachi of funding options. Financial supports has a crusial role in increasing the equipment of sports activity. When tools of them are up-to-date, more students tend go clubs and do sports. The northway statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in universities, showed that the universities which have more up-to-date apparatus in their clubs, more students pay attention in sports and their health.
To recapitulate, all the aforementioned reasons converge to the point that holding sports activity and social activities should aim for universities with priority like the other classes. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim,which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that a survey be conducted to find out whether students have experienced valuable results by ding sports in colleges or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2915.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25225225225 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00158981763 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500900900901 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 902.7 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7586237501 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232987208539 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647619489125 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567766444266 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127652359143 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641239176016 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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