Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
When it comes to the issue of that is better for the children to choose jobs similar to their parents jobs, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that it is better for the children to choose jobs similar to their parents jobs because there are so many reasons to support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that it is better for the children to choose jobs similar to their parents jobs. Most of the children consider their parent as a models so, they used to take their parents advises. If the children jobs similar to their parents jobs, they get a chance to ask and learn from their parents in their practical life not just in their daily life. Eventually, they will get a lot of benefits from their parents experience. And this will be very motivated for them especially during their new business life.
Another reason why I advocate that it is better for the children to get jobs similar to their parents jobs is the high competition. The life now is very rapid and there is a high competition between people which makes growing in new business require a lot of effort, money and time. If the children continue in their parents jobs, they will consume the time and the money that the need in order to progress in their new jobs. for instance, if the child start his job in his father company, he do not needs to wast time and money to advertise for his new company.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the children have a background about their parents jobs because they grew up seeing what their parents do and how they work. So, the children can estimated what is the advantages and the disadvantages for their new career. Eventually, this will help them to solve any problem that they may face.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, although people who hold the opposite opinion may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...in order to progress in their new jobs. for instance, if the child start his job in...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...start his job in his father company, he do not needs to wast time and money to adv...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...is job in his father company, he do not needs to wast time and money to advertise for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65601965602 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40119922468 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452088452088 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2303919268 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458356402148 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173196862417 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139957475483 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256507992837 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140628979788 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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