Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The job that we choose is an important part of our lives. We spend the rest of our lives in a job that we choose and our successfulness depends on the job that we chose. Some people believe that children should choose a job that is similar to their parents' job; others would disagree. In my view it is better that children follow their parents and choose their job similar to them for the following reasons.
First and foremost, chikdren can learn many things from their parents who are always available and try hard to helm them to be successful. For example, when I finished my studies and graduated from university, I did not like to work for my dad, because I have always thought that it is really hard for me to work with my dad because we always had problem to talk to each other. After two years of searching for a good job with enough salary and also a good insurance, I understand that in this way I would never would be successful becasue they did not even pay me wnough money for my daily life and with that money I would never be able to be on my own. Thus, I decided to give a chance to my self and my dad who always asked me to work for him. Now, after three years of working for my dad I understand that I knew nothing about counting. I learn everything from my dad and he taught me everything that I need to be successful. I think without my dad I was nothing and I am really glad that I chose to work for him.
Second, I think if the children choose a job similar to their parents, it has benefit for their parents too. I remember, when I was in university, my best friend, Sarah, did not like her major. She always has said that her father made her to choose this major and she did not interested in being architecture. But, when she was senior, the tables were turned and she started to work for his father and she felt that it was something that would be perfect in. Working with her father not only help her to learn lots of things from her father, but also cause that she become really successful and one of the best in her major. So, now his father is retired and her daughter is running the company and he is sure that she always do the best without any fault and he really trusts her work.
In sum, even though some people think that selecting a job similar to their parents is really tiring and they will not enjoy that enough, but as I said it is really beneficial for both parents and children. I think parents should convince their children to trust them and let their parents to help them with their work and try to continue what their parents do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...er to choose this major and she did not interested in being architecture. But, when she wa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.153846153846 0.229887763892 67% => OK
Verbs: 0.18574108818 0.158761421928 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0656660412758 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0600375234522 0.046263068375 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.166979362101 0.0685040099705 244% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0225140712946 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.23093913987 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0412757973734 0.0309702414327 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0487804878049 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0168855534709 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015009380863 0.0139019557991 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2584.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 494.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.86048508987 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.255060728745 0.338922669872 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.157894736842 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0789473684211 0.174417080927 45% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0546558704453 0.112833075102 48% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.23093913987 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406882591093 0.524397521467 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.8139374323 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7216071916 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 41.7894736842 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.722727272727 1.45489161554 50% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410880349385 0.300154397459 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.197740940503 0.103427244359 191% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.121400957374 0.0752933317313 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58195489931 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141531253464 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182488767574 0.114077575197 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112239835169 0.0781384742642 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293680797728 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0338751472388 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306560926264 0.210909579961 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676942194531 0.0618886996521 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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