Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is an ongoing controversy about whether students should concentrate on knowing idea and concepts or focus on studying facts. In my opinion, I strongly support learners to understand concepts first, because knowing the schemes is beneficial to students for several reasons.
First, the students will know exactly what information they know obtain, if they understand the concept of lessons well. Nowadays, people live in the digital era, which tremendous information and data can be accessed anywhere and anytime. To prevent students from being loss in the load of facts, they should know the outline of the course closely so that they can locate the precise data to strengthen their comprehension. For instance, during my high school, I learned about local history of my hometown, which I had to write a paper as a assignment. I didn't understand clearly about the concept of the history that I should write, so I ended up wasting two weeks gathering load of detailed information that I did not need. Thus, knowing the overall idea can save time of students and lead to better understanding in the lesson.
Second, idea can broaden scope of knowledge for many people, bringing valuable innovation to the world. Human cannot create something new if they stuck with existing facts, such as the fact that people used to believe that the world is flat. In contrast, comprehending the concept brings people to something new and useful. For example, Isaac Newton, one of the great scientist of the world, learnt the concept of movement of any object, which needs the force to create motion. Finally, by seeing apples falling from trees, he realized that there is gravity force. Clearly, concept plays significant role in many area, and should be focused by ant learner.
In conclusion, students should concentrate on ideas and concepts to create clear comprehension, because these help students to focus on information and can bring innovation to the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...metown, which I had to write a paper as a assignment. I didnt understand clearly ...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...had to write a paper as a assignment. I didnt understand clearly about the concept of...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'many areas'.
Suggestion: many areas
...arly, concept plays significant role in many area, and should be focused by ant learner. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253443526171 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.157024793388 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0661157024793 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358126721763 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0468319559229 0.0685040099705 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137741046832 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0440771349862 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69276036 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358126721763 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.00275482093664 0.00188951952338 146% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716253443526 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0330578512397 0.0209618222197 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0110192837466 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1962.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 321.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11214953271 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411214953271 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314641744548 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183800623053 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0965732087227 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69276036 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557632398754 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 59.8708335469 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8744412711 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 52.8641744548 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.81609195402 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294456283487 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108237194982 0.103427244359 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0465134284901 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530807456696 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190830144734 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123456245297 0.114077575197 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744391752401 0.0781384742642 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304420342071 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121234420201 0.067059652881 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233878815118 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545568602635 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.