Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When it comes to issue that the opinions of celebrities are more important to the younger people than they are to the older people, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different thoughts. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the opinions of celebrities are more important to the younger people than to the old people because of many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:

First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the opinions of celebrities affect on the younger people than on the old people. The technology today developed rapidly and that in turn return a high benefit to the famous people. The famous people today have many ways to reach the general public for instance, the social media and the television. Additionally, the young people follow the technology development. So, it is easiest and more influence for the famous people to reach the young than reaching the old people.

Another point why I advocate that the opinions of celebrities are more important to the younger people than they are to the old people is the impact of that opinion on the receiver character. The person’s character build when he grew up. So, the own experience of the old people effect on their decisions rather than any advice they may heard from others. However, the young people are very effected by what they heard especially the advice from the person whom has a good impact on their characters like the famous people.

Finally, it is a well-established fact that the young people see their parents as an old fashion people. So, it is important to advise them by the person whom they trust and love. Additionally, the famous people always should behave in a good manor to gain their fans. On the other hand, the old people are wise enough to distinguish between the good and bad things.

From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...rstood that the opinions of celebrities affect on the younger people than on the old peop...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...eople today have many ways to reach the general public for instance, the social media and the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82188295165 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52084910014 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450381679389 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1161988892 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.277777778 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306355441161 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103740911329 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796520554362 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171763781941 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084135377271 0.0645574589148 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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