Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Both the lecturer and the reading passage are talking about the important influence of the young people that determine the future society. Some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons of their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that, young people today have great influence. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraphs:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the young people decisions have great impact on the whole future society because of the rapid development in the technology. The rapid development technology makes the world as a small city. So, the young people can see and know what happen in the world. Eventually, those young people will effect by each other and trying to develop their community in different ways. So, will have great impact which can be a way to develop their countries.
Another reason why I advocate that the influence of the young people today is important is the rapid life that we live in it. Today the life is very tough so, the young people trying to improve themselves in different way in order to reach their goals. If the young people depend on themselves during their early life stage, they will be very strong person in the future. And eventually, they will have brilliant future which help the whole society by being creative and skillful person.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that today there are many organizations for the young people. Many young people attend in such organization and that help them to learn how to be a good leader in the future. Additionally, such organizations give and encourage the young people to help their communities. So, they get a chance to take a part in their country development and prosperity during their early life stage. So, they put creative plans to develop their communities in order to compete with other countries.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people how hople the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ld. Eventually, those young people will effect by each other and trying to develop the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, talking about, first of all, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94056847545 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55291403758 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6639345283 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260016027071 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874673890498 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588165955605 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146148292894 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827478077227 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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