do you agree or disagree? life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
The question is whether life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children or not. Everyone in consideration to his own private viewpoint can maintain a specific direction toward this issue. In my perspective, life is more convenient than past because of the existence of technology. My arguments and reasons are listed below that will strengthen my point of view:
To begin with, it is axiomatic that people were being killed due to simplest diseases or wounds. The main reason for this mortality was lack of medical equipment and sciences; in contrast nowadays there are the best medical universities with the most professional professors. The progress of electronic devises, drug industry is other notable support for this claim. Even more when people find a trouble related with their health, they are able to seek about its treatment approaches if their doctor is not available.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that people especially young generation can broaden their knowledge base thorough the newest version of computers, smart phones and tablets and so on, high speed of internet and access to the greatest data base in the world in few minutes. Such a technology has given an incredible opportunity to students for doing their research papers. Online classes is another achievement in this ground and the most important its objective is the save time and money.
Having discussed this issue from this point of view, I am going to empower it by the following discussion. Technology not just in sciences, but it has created the undeniable changes in entertainments of people. Having exiting funfairs, aquatic parks, the awesome cinemas with the advanced sound system and many other things do not allow people to stay at home. All of things help human's minds to remain happy. It goes without saying that the joy destroys all of negative thoughts.
By Taking all above mentioned arguments, the following conclusion could be drown that today's life has gained a great welfare and peace in the attendance of technology more than it was in the past.
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and the most important its objective is the save time and money.
and the most important objective is the time and money saved.
Technology not just in sciences, but it has created the undeniable changes
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1746 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.932 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.627 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.824 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.291 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.294 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.273 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the simplest'.
Suggestion: to the simplest
...matic that people were being killed due to simplest diseases or wounds. The main reason for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minds remaining'.
Suggestion: minds remaining
...stay at home. All of things help humans minds to remain happy. It goes without saying that the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ollowing conclusion could be drown that todays life has gained a great welfare and pe...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nclusion could be drown that todays life has gained a great welfare and peace in ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'in contrast', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268929503916 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.146214099217 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107049608355 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0339425587467 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0522193211488 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13315926893 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0443864229765 0.0351676179071 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68547809307 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023498694517 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10182767624 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104438642298 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00783289817232 0.0139019557991 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2142.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 354.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05084745763 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367231638418 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274011299435 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194915254237 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132768361582 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68547809307 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.524397521467 120% => OK
Word variations: 76.7232199657 59.2087087015 130% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.125 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4066622464 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.875 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.5261299435 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.92134831461 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199241179236 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0702090874708 0.103427244359 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.045774538467 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507381686664 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176625192053 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890403320956 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155277111594 0.0781384742642 199% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310490036764 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0356125797899 0.067059652881 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142851373169 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114042598463 0.0618886996521 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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