Do you prefer? Eating in restaurant or cooking at home?
The question is whether eating in out can be best choice for people or at home. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this issue; however, I am inclined to declare that the restaurants or coffeehouses can keep me interest toward themselves perennially. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that the world has changed in several ways, so such a technology- driven world requires a huge amount of effort. The competition is ruling in the societies and the current generation is attempting to obtain a huge mass of wealthy; hence, this circumstance asks people to cut doing unnecessary things. As a matter a fact, the value of time has been equal with gold in 21th century. One should not forget that cooking, waiting in long queues for buying ingredients, preparing materials and washing dishes and so on, can waste their time. I am willing to elaborate on this by mentioning that when people return at home after working for a long time, a numb and torpid feeling would overcome them; consequently, cooking at home is not effective for people.
The second reason for my argument lies the reality that nowadays, food and business industry have been emerged together; therefore, the main objective of this is that investors tend to attract human beings with different interests toward diversity of food cultures. In a comparison with the past, one can realize that the restaurants are providing the best and healthiest ingredients for their meal because they are aware from being worry of humans about their fitness. Apart from this, since people tolerate high pressures in related to their life, work and study; subsequently, a compensation for mitigating their pains is food. It goes without saying that trying the foods of diverse nations can be a kind of fun or joy for them.
Moreover, there is a bit of different here. Going a variety of restaurants can help people to improve their interpersonal skills and as a result, they will be able to make new friends. For instance, last year, when I was in an Italian restaurant, an Italian couple helped me to select the most delicious food and in following we could create a friendly relationship with each other.
In short, this conclusion could be drawn that eating at restaurant has numerous merits such as saving time, getting familiar with different foods and boosting personal relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, i feel, in short, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73953555876 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60756501182 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9152991851 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12422346827 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436534641528 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642099507836 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765408084316 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470820584471 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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