eating at hoe or at reasturant
ome people think that eating food at restaurants is more enjoyable than eating at home. People think that going to restaurants is more fun. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that eating at home is more preferable for me. The basis of my opinion is financial and social.
First, from the financial perspective, eating at home will save a lot of money. All the moms around the world try to cook and save money. For example, my mom always watch the cooking programs on the television and she tries to imitate them and actually she cooks delicious food and in the mean time she saves a lot of money. If all the moms try to cook at home that, will allow better financial situation for the whole family. Even though, eating at restaurants some time consider to be a kind of fun when, we want to enjoy our time with some friends, we prefer to eat at restaurants. Because of this it is best if we eat at home and save our money for some thing more beneficial.
It is also very reasonable to assume that eating at home will help to increase our social net work as a family. No one can ignore that staying at home and eating lunch with your children while we are watching television is the best kind of entertainments ever. If the whole family mom, dad and the children enjoy their time together while they eat, this will be a good opportunity for them to talk and discuss important situation. That is not only beneficial for the children to have more contact with their parent but also for the parent to understand their children needs better. Although, some parent think that it is more comfortable to eat in restaurants, as the whole family can enjoy the time together. Starting from the mom she dose not has to worry about preparing the food. The dad will enjoy going out side as it is a sort of change from the daily routine. Finally the children prefer to eat junk food as usual.
In conclusion, for the reason I stated above, I think that eating at home is more preferable for me. Parent would eat healthy food at home. They could save money to go for a vacation or buy some thing more important. Eating at home help all the member of the family to understand each other better, as it is a good chance to talk and communicate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44859813084 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45618429605 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443925233645 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9812847044 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5454545455 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293799980986 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113041771086 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1207993145 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232512608491 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498646407445 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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