eople behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?
Behavior, in the most of cases, does not depend of clothes. People who have a bad mood or some psychological problem can be affected with it. The ways in which people dressed are chosen by them, so it should not affect their behavior.
Psychological disease can change the behavior of people that have that problem. Overmore it can affect other characteristic of them, like mood due to they are not sane people. They can be affected by the way like other people are dressed even more with them own clothes. Obviously they would receive some professional help. For example: i have a friend who has that problem because when he see one person with red clothes, he change completely in addition he can turn aggressive too.
Someone has the freedom to choose which clothes to use further they can use it in the moment when they want to, for this reason it should not change their behavior. In fact the other people must accept the way in which others dressed although if that way does not like it. If somebody change their behavior by others clothes, he or she has seriously problem. For instance I like to use short all the time. One day, I was at the mall with my girlfriend because we went to eat. A guy does not like my girlfriend way to dress, so I had a big problem with him.
To sum up I disagree with this point. Clothes should not change the mood or the behavior of others. A individual who chooses their own dress should not change mood for that reason. If someone has been affected by this problem, he or she should go to a doctor for medical care.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
Behavior, in the most of cases, does not depend of clothes. People who...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
...nd who has that problem because when he see one person with red clothes, he change ...
^^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
... he see one person with red clothes, he change completely in addition he can turn aggr...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... clothes to use further they can use it in the moment when they want to, for this reason it s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
... that way does not like it. If somebody change their behavior by others clothes, he or...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...nge the mood or the behavior of others. A individual who chooses their own dress ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, by the way, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4668989547 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3607448188 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5351187276 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995221574306 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373309511951 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321082800832 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680918482905 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320508606182 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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