Getting a higher education is a big step in any person life. In the universities and colleges, the young people learn a tremendous amount of things, as along with, many life experiences. Focusing on major classes is so important, also, being involved in the university activities is very useful. In my opinion, being a part of sport, music, social activities is a priority and I completely support the idea of equal financial support to these activities as other classes.
Getting a higher education is a big step in any person life. In the universities and colleges, the young people learn a tremendous amount of things, as along with, many life experiences. Focusing on major classes is so important, also, being involved in the university activities is very useful. In my opinion, being a part of sport, music, social activities is a priority and I completely support the idea of equal financial support to these activities as other classes.
Playing in the university teams, or being a part of social life in the university have a good impact on the students in different ways, that will help them to get ride from the studying stress, increase their body activities, that mean help them to live a healthy lifestyle, in addition, let them practicing social life in the university community before doing that in real life experience, which in turn help them in the future. If the students spend all their time in studying that will help them to earn high grades in the tests, but, on the other hand, that will affect their personality in a bad way. So financial support to these activities will invest in the student's life and university success.
The university sports team, university social events, look like a free advertising for the university, in addition to the good reputation this university will gain from being the winner in such sport, or the successful in a specific event that they have been regulated. It is true that this income may not be satisfied to the student who seeks only a good education, but there are many students wants a good education and rich social life in their university experience. To be an attractive university, the university administration has to focus on both sides, education quality and other activities.
financial support for the sports and activities is very important, that helps the students to enjoy their journey in the university or college and graduate with both the good education and fair life experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, as to, in addition, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94047619048 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79224407675 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.1226539864 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.909090909 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374823548022 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187013940359 0.076458572812 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173071217504 0.0737576698707 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253895665575 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205908873243 0.0645574589148 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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