Has technology made the world a better place to live?
Rapid changes and complexity of today's world represent new challenges and put new demands on the societies. Advance technologies are of the utmost of these alterations and the attitude toward this innovation phenomenon is completely varied. A plethora of people is in conviction that technology helps humankind to experience living in better world. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that technology afield societies from humanity which is the ultimate gole of living and the nuclear war or terrorists can prove this statement. I am of the opinion that technology opens up multitude opportunities which were unimaginable and unreachable without it, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, the brilliant breakthrough in medical science is undoubtedly one of the primary consequences of development of technology. In this era, numerous fatal diseases have been eradicated thanks to new technologies have been applied in several medical fields. Admittedly, longevity is an acceptable factor for evaluating the improvement in level of life, and the recent statistics revealed the remarkable of enhancement of this element in the world. In addition, technology increases the awareness of public which causes they become more conscious about all the plausible dangers peripheral them. for example, when specific virus or illness become prevalent in particular region, all the people get informed of it and do the necessary actions in order to prevent them from getting involved in the problem.
Another important factor which should be taken into consideration is the advent of some technologies has been a revolution in the history. Internet is counted number one in this list, so that most of the people cannot envision their life without it. Internet was incredibly efficient in various issues. For instance, it makes a huge difference in educational system. Indeed, students experience far more useful school days rather than their parents. They can readily have access to wide range of information in the blink of an eye. Internet allows them to communicate so easily.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that in spite of all the misusing of the new technologies, they have been so useful for human since they not only intensify the hygiene of societies but also help current generation to have easy life rather than their parents.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in particular', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251798561151 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.141486810552 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10071942446 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479616306954 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383693045564 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148681055156 0.118717715034 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0359712230216 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95069436273 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167865707434 0.0309702414327 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00239808153477 0.00188951952338 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.10551558753 0.0887237588012 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119904076739 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143884892086 0.0139019557991 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2446.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36979166667 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.419270833333 0.338922669872 124% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333333333333 0.251872472559 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2421875 0.174417080927 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184895833333 0.112833075102 164% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95069436273 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596354166667 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 71.4361256381 59.2087087015 121% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3333333333 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.464659122 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.888888889 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 54.6666666667 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.91578947368 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210703801367 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0840892575422 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0524655370641 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512131621271 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19482273702 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845044918584 0.114077575197 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515947829724 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444179282088 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0427046084741 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14987067937 0.210909579961 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347544899697 0.0618886996521 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.